On the 25th of this month, my partner and I were asked to present our individual magazine issues and the blogs that accomanied them.
The following is the constructive criticism we recieved from our instructor and our classmates:
- Needs to change article headings on cover so that the white outline is not visible, making text harder to read.
- Also needs to make pictures more featured, enlarge them.
- Page numbers must be added to articles
Before Revisons:
After Revision:
After Revision:
Removed the white outline of the subheadings
Featured our pictures more prominently on the table and contents and on the articles.
Spread out the text on the final two pages consisting of the article.
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